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Zach Weiberg's avatar

Carved me with your teeth.....keep writing. Im hooked.

The Human Bond's avatar

I really liked this part but couldn’t restack .. or don’t know how to .. but loved reading it:

time,

you ruthless architect -

build me with your harsh blueprints.

carve me with your ticking teeth.

Jay's avatar

Lilly, Lilly, Lilly. Once again so powerful and impactful. Time, the one thing, once we spend it we can't get anymore of. I want moments of silence, true. But i want those moments that explode my mind, my heart, my body so I know I'm alive, standing in the fire. Thank you so much for being here!!!

T Mayer's avatar

Wow. This may be a better way to look at the suffering I've endured. Like a sculpture. Thank you.

Josephine Driscoll's avatar

wow this is amazing!!!

Lesley's avatar

Lily, This is so powerful, time and its passage, forging the contours of your life, who you are. A brave call…

Restore & Prepare's avatar

Boldness to face the inevitable! Such courage in you. Your poem is a reflection of who you are or want to be. Thank you for sharing your life …. Wow!

Ítōl-shál's avatar

The beautiful truth of security in brutality; well done πŸ‘πŸΎ